Roberto-De-Luca's Reviews

[Iron Marshal Character Design]

Wonderfull! I really love your style, the pose the details and the colour! Maybe the shoulders are just a little bit dislocated; the arms could be moved a bit. I'll send you an image with some quick corrections in photoshop to show you how I'd do, cause these are the kind of "good" criticism that I hear a lot from noted comic artists at conventions when I show them my stuff. However, It's clear you know your stuff (probably better than me ^_^) and right now I'm just nitpicking so five stars are well earned for me. Great work!

alejandroartworks responds:

Hey man you are absolutely right!
Sorry for the late reply dude but ive been off lately.

[Harry Potter & The Lecture of The Visiting Scholars]

Congratulation! It's a very difficult illustration to deal with it! I especially like the colours! And using watercolour into an environment scene like should have been very time-consuming! I've got nothing to say about the colour, I like it very much and the drawing is nice too. If can I give you any suggestion to improve I would say to learn to be more accurate with the perspective, especially in the curved lines (I struggle with it myself) and a tip that was given to me by a comic artist that improved a lot my drawing was avoiding central perspective and symmetry in composition; it feel artificial and a bit "boring". Another thing you could do to improved your composition is using more overlaps, they make the pace deeper (see how nice is that table that covers the feet of the age to the left? It makes really clear that the wizard is behind the table and that create deep and make the scene more interesting, use this technique more!). If You are a little confuse, don't worry they're are some advanced tips that I've fully understood quite recently so there's not need to rush! But I hope that they could help you to improve faster than me! ^_^" You're very talented, keep going! :D

lynxus responds:

Thank you very much. I do appreciate the tips and will attempt to incorporate them into future works :D

[Ayr Byrd]

I love the character and the colour palette. The outcome it's very professional!

jouste responds:

hey thanks! I always strive for that!

*highfives*